haha just got home from pub with a few mates from band, heres a song we just recorded enjoy =)

http://heardy.com/new/knob.zip

dude...

you are on the right track... but perhaps you should listen to some more tour de piss, and then retry lol...

if you havnt heard tour de piss well.. there is the problem.

If you are going to do it piss up style, gain some hints from those who do it right, then go and do it your own way with that kind of stuff in mind.

although i have most of their songs i have no hosting for them.

in other words try again, you are on the right track, you just need the song changed SLIGHTLY.. like to include lyrics like

"oh wifey... wifey... im ... going to cut you with a... rusty knife!"

or

*with rising pitch and intensity*
"Cookie.. cookie... cookie.. cookie cookie is a biscuit!"

If you changed the melody of the guitar back there you could do the themesong for like doom2 or something =D that would be SO awesome.